【大发彩神官方邀请码】缤Fun英语 Miss Carol/麵包超人大战棉花糖

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  新学期过了另另一一两个多多月,也不学生要提交第一份写作功课。学生们由於在暑假期间玩到尽,现在提不起劲写作,文笔更那么放暑假日后那麼流畅。

  在课堂当中,我时不时提醒学生英文是一门技能,都不 一门知识。技能也不应该要时不时练习,都不 一时三刻便并能写得出好文章。若学生整个暑假那么接触语文,怎麼可不都要写到流畅大发彩神官方邀请码的文章呢?也不你这个 星期让让我们 都让让我们 都从基本步重新日后开使,作为另一一两个多多交功课前的练习,我鼓励学生以让让我们 都让让我们 都喜欢的卡通人大发彩神官方邀请码物或偶像作一篇短文,练习一般常用的Link大发彩神官方邀请码ers Tr大发彩神官方邀请码ansitional words并当事人设立情节大发彩神官方邀请码、不同人物等等。

  其中一则短文非常可爱,在这裏跟让让我们 都让让我们 都分享。学生在文章中把当事人的小猫命名为小日后的偶像“麵包超人”Anpanman,与一隻居住周边的本地流浪猫“棉花糖”Marshmallow。

  Normally, Anpanman protects his home and surrounding zones, because he doesn't want his areas to be occupied by others.  Some aggressive neighbor cats always like to extend their zones and so timid  cats might be defeated by them. Surprisingly, as a resident cat, Anpanman let Marshmallow, a strange neighbor cat, occupied his home peacefully. But later on I found out my 10-year-old Anpanman couldn't breathe and he needed to stay in a vet hospital for 2 days.

  文章整体组织尚可,但用词方面可不都要比较concrete, specific and solid,譬如猫一般保卫家庭及周边的环境可不都要用“defend his home and the area/territory he considers most important to him .”

  学生描述她的“麵包超人”猫Anpanman让让我们 都让让我们 都说让一隻陌生猫“棉花糖”佔据他的地盘。用“Anpanman let Marshmallow, a strange neighbor cat, occupied his home peacefully” 语法上很糙奇怪,可不都要改成“Anpanman allowed Marshmallow, invaded his home / Anpanman did not do anything to prevent a home invasion.”

  另外,让让我们 都让让我们 都把“呼吸困难”写成英语,都不 “都能不能 了呼吸”“couldn't breathe”。可不都要写成“Anpanman was having extreme difficulty breathing OR had breathing problems.”

  词彙的运用往往跟让让我们 都让让我们 都的阅读习惯关连,不需死记硬背。从阅读中学习词彙,多从写作中练习。多写作便能把惯用字,collocation and syntax挥洒自如。

  说到猫的生活模式,不论他/她/它是超人或棉花糖,they are only united to creative people because they do not fit themselves into prescribed human behaviors and patterns.

  Miss Carol

  大专院校语文讲师、企业培训讲师及国际英文公开试主考官。

  carolc.english@gmail.com